Monday, October 15, 2012

Self Critique

Well, knowing how that I need to work on shadowing, and adding more depth, these are things that I understood. With this piece I knew that I would have a problem with, though I believe I did a good job on this one, it still has hard lines though I followed the reference as close as possible.

Self critiquing this piece once again, I knew about the proportions and line control prior to the lessons I have gone over. Completion of the piece I would say is my failure on this one, It starts to really get good depth, but then there are only a few areas that I did that to, completing it would make it really stand out.
Overall a fine piece out of my portfolio, a few hard lines in the upper traps and a lack of shadowing on his left upper quad would make this piece complete.
Lower half on this centaur should've been proportioned correctly, his gluts are a bit small, and a bit of hard shadows going on his lower right ribcage.

 This was and probably is my best work for the anatomy of a male. Completion of this would be my biggest flaw on it. This is the first Digital work I did, and not completing it has made me not want to show it. There should be more of a background and I think I also screwed up on the toes.

There are many pieces of work that I have come to really know, I knew about my weaknesses and have been addressing them already. I am hoping that I take the knowledge that I have learned in the last year and now apply it to my work in the 3d realms



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